# English FAL Grade 11 Paper 3 Eastern Cape November 2022 Memo

> Grade 11 English FAL Paper 3 memorandum from the Eastern Cape November Exam 2022, 14 pages. Read online or download the free PDF.

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- Subject: English FAL
- Grade: Grade 11
- Document type: Memorandum
- Year: 2022
- Exam period: Eastern Cape November Exam
- Paper: 3
- Curriculum: CAPS
- Pages: 14

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                    NATIONAL
               SENIOR CERTIFICATE

                           GRADE 11

                   NOVEMBER 2022

   ENGLISH FIRST ADDITIONAL LANGUAGE P3
             MARKING GUIDELINE
                (EXEMPLAR)

MARKS:   100

               This marking guideline consists of 14 pages.

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2                     ENGLISH FIRST ADDITIONAL LANGUAGE P3                    (EC/NOVEMBER 2022)

INSTRUCTIONS AND INFORMATION

This marking guideline must be used in conjunction with the attached English FAL
assessment rubrics for SECTIONS A, B and C.

NOTE:       All pieces of writing should be read at least TWICE during assessment,
            once for content and once for language respectively. Errors have to be
            indicated in your second reading.

SECTION A: ESSAY

QUESTION 1

INSTRUCTIONS TO MARKERS:

▪     Candidates are required to write on ONE topic only.
▪     The ideas listed below the topics are only some ways in which the topics can
      be interpreted.
▪     Full credit must be given for the candidates’ own interpretation.
▪     Marking must be objective. Give credit for relevant ideas.
▪     Use the 50-mark grid to mark the essays. The texts produced by candidates
      must be assessed according to the following criteria:
      o     Content and planning (30 marks)
      o     Language, style and editing (15 marks)
      o     Structure (5 marks)

NOTE:       •   Adhere to the length of 200–250 words as prescribed in the CAPS
                document. However, should the maximum word count be exceeded,
                refer to the First Additional Language Examination Guidelines, 2021.
            •   No additional penalties may be imposed as the rubric itself imposes
                penalties.

1.1         A childhood friendship that influenced me

            Narrative/Reflective/Descriptive essay

            •   If narrative, a storyline illustrating the statement must be evident in
                which a series of events are shown. There must be a logical sequence
                of tense.
            •   If reflective, there must be a personal account of thought processes
                and feelings/emotions.
            •   If descriptive, there must be a vivid description of an experience/
                incident.

            NOTE:    A candidate may write an essay which contains elements of
                     more than one type of essay/any other essay type.                    [50]

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1.2     Disappointment!

        Descriptive/Narrative/Reflective/Discursive/Argumentative essay

        •    If descriptive, there must be a vivid description of an incident/experience
             to illustrate the statement.
        •    If narrative, a strong storyline must be evident in which a series of events
             lead to a negative/positive outcome. There must be a logical sequence of
             tense.
        •    If reflective, there must be a personal account of thought processes and
             feelings/emotions.
        •    If discursive, the candidate may come to a particular conclusion at the end
             of the essay but the arguments for and against must be well-balanced
             and clearly analysed in the course of the essay.
        •    If argumentative, the essay must reflect a specific argument or viewpoint
             for or against the topic. The candidate should give a range of arguments
             to support and substantiate his/her view.

        NOTE:        A candidate may write an essay which contains elements of more
                     than one type of essay/any other essay type.                              [50]

1.3     Love is better than hatred

        Reflective/Narrative/Descriptive/Discursive/Argumentative essay

        •    If reflective, the candidate must still take a stance for or against the topic.
        •    If narrative, a strong storyline must be evident in which a series of events
             lead to a positive or negative outcome. There must be a logical sequence
             of tense.
        •    If descriptive, the candidate should create the picture in words, trying to
             use as many senses as possible to make the description clear.
        •    If discursive, the candidate may come to a particular conclusion at the end
             of the essay but the arguments for and against must be well-balanced and
             clearly analysed in the course of the essay.
         •   If argumentative, the essay must reflect a specific argument or viewpoint
             for or against the topic. The candidate should give a range of arguments
             to support and substantiate his/her view.

        NOTE:        A candidate may write an essay which contains elements of more
                     than one type of essay/any other essay type.                              [50]

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1.4    The lesson was …

       Narrative/Reflective/Descriptive/Discursive essay

       •    If narrative, a strong storyline must be evident in which a series of events
            leads to a positive or negative outcome. There must be a logical sequence
            of tense
       •    If reflective, the candidate must still take a stance for or against the topic.
       •    If descriptive, the candidate should create the picture in words, trying to
            use as many senses as possible to make the description clear.
       •    If discursive, the candidate may come to a particular conclusion at the
            end of the essay but the arguments for and against must be well-balanced
            and clearly analysed in the course of the essay.

       NOTE:         A candidate may write an essay which contains elements of more
                     than one type of essay/any other essay type.                              [50]

1.5   “It takes a dream to get started, desire to keep going and determination
       to finish.” – Eddie Harris Jnr.

       Discursive/Descriptive/Reflective/Narrative essay

       •    If discursive, the candidate may come to a particular conclusion at the
            end of the essay but the arguments for and against must be well-balanced
            and clearly analysed in the course of the essay.
       •    If descriptive, the candidate should create the picture in words, trying to
            use as many senses as possible to make the description clear.
       •    If reflective, the candidate must still take a stance for or against the topic.
       •    If narrative, a strong storyline must be evident in which a series of events
            leads to a positive or negative outcome. There must be a logical sequence
            of tense.

       NOTE:     A candidate may write an essay which contains elements of more
                 than one type of essay/any other essay type.                                  [50]

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1.6     People’s choices

        Discursive//Reflective/Narrative/Descriptive/Argumentative essay

        •    If discursive, the candidate may come to a particular conclusion at the end
             of the essay but the arguments for and against must be well-balanced and
             clearly analysed in the course of the essay.
        •    If reflective, the candidate must still take a stance for or against the topic.
        •    If narrative, a strong storyline must be evident in which a series of events
             leads to a negative/positive outcome. There must be a logical sequence
             of tense.
        •    If descriptive, the candidate should create the picture in words, trying to
             use as many senses as possible to make the description clear
        •    If argumentative, the essay must reflect a specific argument or viewpoint
             for or against the topic. The candidate should give a range of arguments
             to support and substantiate his/her view.

        NOTE:        A candidate may write an essay which contains elements of more
                     than one type of essay/any other essay type.                              [50]

        Interpretation of pictures

        •    The candidate may interpret the picture in any way.
        •    The candidate may choose to write any type of essay.
        •    The interpretation must be linked to the pictures.
        •    The candidate should give the essay a suitable title.
        •    The candidate may write in any appropriate tense.
        •    The following ideas, among others, may be explored in response to the
             pictures:

1.7     Picture: Person going through a door and is handed a baby

        •    Literal interpretation: e.g. an open door, going through a door, going
             through a stage of development, fatherhood, raising children, going from
             one phase to the next, emotional development, babies, starting a family
             etc.
        •    Abstract interpretations: realising your dreams, stages in life, life one
             step at a time, reaching your ultimate goal, etc.                                 [50]

1.8     Picture: Mask and Rose

        •    Literal interpretation: the different masks we wear, love and hate,
             tragedy and comedy, acting, concealing who you are, hiding your
             emotions, celebrating an event, romance, joy and sadness etc.
        •    Abstract interpretations: sadness, frustration, anger, concealing a
             disability or distortion of the face, concealing love, contrasts, difficulty in
             love, opposites etc.                                                              [50]

                                                                    TOTAL SECTION A:            50

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SECTION B: LONGER TRANSACTIONAL TEXT

QUESTION 2

INSTRUCTIONS TO MARKERS:

•       Candidates are required to answer ONE question.
•       Marking must be objective. Give credit for relevant ideas.
•       Use the 30-mark assessment rubric to mark the responses in this section. The texts
        produced by candidates must be assessed according to the following criteria as set
        out in the assessment rubric:
        o     Content, planning and format (18 marks)
        o     Language, style and editing (12 marks)

NOTE:
• Adhere to the length of 120–150 words as prescribed in the CAPS document.
  However, should the maximum word count be reached mid-sentence, read to the
  end of that sentence.
• No additional penalties may be imposed as the rubric itself imposes penalties.

2.1        FRIENDLY LETTER

           A letter to an elderly neighbour

           • The following aspects of format must be included:
             o Address of sender
             o Date
             o Greeting/Salutation
             o Suitable ending

           • The tone and register of the letter should be friendly and informal.
           • The candidate must explain to the elderly neighbour about the noise likely to
             happen during party.                                                            [30]

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2.2       OBITUARY

          Your beloved uncle has passed on

          •   The tone must be formal.

          •   The following aspects of format must be included:
              o    Full name(s) of the deceased
              o    Date of birth
              o    Date of death
              o    Birthplace
              o    Where the person was living at the time of death
              o    Key survivors
              o    Date, time and place of funeral

          •   The following aspects may be included:
              o Biographical information
              o Cause of death

          •   Tribute must be paid to the deceased                                          [30]

2.3       REVIEW

          •   The candidates should give their own subjective view on the book they
              have read.

      •       The following information should be in the book review:
              o    title and author of the book
              o    setting
              o    brief outline of the plot and
              o    candidate’s own evaluation of the book
              o    what particular / specific moral values the book tries to impart /
                   what values does it want to teach the youth.

          •   The tone and register of the review should be appropriate to the content
              and the target audience (the candidate’s peers).

          •   The review must be written in paragraph form.                                  [30]

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 2.4    DIALOGUE

        A conversation between yourself and your mother.

        •    A context must be provided at the beginning of the dialogue.

        •    The following aspects of the dialogue format must be included:

             o       The names of the speakers should be followed by colons.
             o       A new line should be used to indicate each new speaker.
             o       Stage directions must be indicated in brackets (if used).

         •   The dialogue must be between yourself and your mother.
         •   The tone must be informal.
         •   The conversation should revolve around relatives not being informed about
             misbehaviour.
         •   The ‘convincing’ of the mother must be clear.                                     [30]

                                                                     TOTAL SECTION B:               30

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SECTION C: SHORTER TRANSACTIONAL TEXT

QUESTION 3

INSTRUCTIONS TO MARKERS:

•     Candidates are required to answer ONE question.
•     Marking must be objective. Give credit for relevant ideas.
•     Use the 20-mark assessment rubric to mark the responses in this section. The
      texts produced by candidates must be assessed according to the following
      criteria as set out in the assessment rubric:
      o      Content, planning and format (12 marks)
      o      Language, style and editing (8 marks)

NOTE:         •   Adhere to the length of 80–100 words as prescribed in the CAPS
                  document. However, should the maximum word count be reached mid-
                  sentence, read to the end of that sentence.
              •   No additional penalties may be imposed as the rubric itself imposes
                  penalties.

3.1       INVITATION CARD

          Invitation to community organisations for Arts Festival.

          •   The invitation must include the following aspects:
               o Recipient
               o Date, venue and time
               o Type of function must be clear
          •   Language should be suited to the context.
      •       Full sentences are not necessary.

          NOTE: No marks are awarded for drawings and illustrations.                      [20]

3.2       DIARY ENTRIES

          The candidate's feelings before and after the funeral.

          •   There MUST be TWO diary entries with two different dates/times.
          •   The entries should express the candidate's feelings before and after the
              funeral.
          •   The diary entries should be written in the first person.
          •   The language should be simple and informal.
          •   The tone must reflect suitable emotions.                                    [20]

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3.3    INSTRUCTIONS

       Instructions for the prevention of the rapid spread of COVID-19.

       Instructions must be in point form.
        •    Numbers or bullets may be used to indicate each new instruction.
        •    The language should be clear and instructive.
        •    Candidates may also choose to write each instruction on a new line
             or leave lines between instructions.
        •    Complete sentences are not necessary.                                      [20]

                                                                TOTAL SECTION C:         20
                                                                   GRAND TOTAL:         100

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  SECTION A: RUBRIC FOR ASSESSING ESSAY – ADDITIONAL LANGUAGE [50 MARKS]
  O     Always use the rubric when marking the creative essay (Paper 3, SECTION A).
  O     The marks from 0–50 have been divided into 5 major level descriptors.
  O     In the Content, Language and Style criteria, each of the five level descriptors is divided into an upper and a lower-level sub-category with the applicable mark
        range and descriptors.
  O     Structure is not affected by the upper level and lower-level division.

Criteria                                 Exceptional                        Skilful                      Moderate                 Elementary            Inadequate
CONTENT AND                                             28–30                           22–24                       16–18                  10–12                   4–6
PLANNING                                - Outstanding/Striking response    - Very well-crafted response. - Satisfactory response - Inconsistently       - Totally irrelevant
(Response and ideas)                      beyond normal expectations.      - Fully relevant and          - Ideas are reasonably     coherent response     response.
Organisation of ideas                   - Intelligent, thought-provoking     interesting.                  coherent and           - Unclear ideas and   - Confused and
for planning                              and mature ideas                 - Ideas with evidence of        convincing.              unoriginal            unfocused ideas.

                          Upper level
Awareness of purpose,                   - Exceptionally well organised       maturity                    - Reasonably organised - Little evidence of    - Vague and repetitive.
audience and context                      and coherent (connected)         - Very well organised and       and coherent including organisation and      - Unorganised and
30 MARKS                                  including introduction, body       coherent (connected)          introduction, body and   coherence.            incoherent.
                                          and conclusion/ending.             including introduction, body conclusion/ending
                                                                             and conclusion/ending.
                                                        25–27                           19–21                       13–15                   7–9                  0–3
                                        - Excellent response but lacks     - Well-crafted response.      - Satisfactory response - Largely irrelevant   - No attempt to
                                          the exceptionally striking       - Relevant and interesting      but some lapses in       response.             respond to the topic
                                          qualities of the outstanding       ideas.                        clarity.               - Ideas tend to be    - Completely irrelevant
                                          essay                            - Well organised and          - Ideas are fairly         disconnected and      and inappropriate
                                        - Mature and intelligent ideas       coherent (connected)          coherent and             confusing.          - Unfocused and
                                        - Skilfully organised and            including introduction, body convincing.             - Hardly any            muddled

                          Lower level
                                          coherent (connected)               and conclusion.             - Some degree of           evidence of
                                          including introduction, body                                     organisation and         organisation and
                                          and conclusion/ending.                                           coherence including      coherence.
                                                                                                           introduction, body and
                                                                                                           conclusion.
                                                     14–15                              11–12                        8–9                    5–6                  0–3

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LANGUAGE, STYLE                        - Tone, register, style,            - Tone, register, style and
                                                                                                     - Tone, register, style   - Tone, register,          - Language
AND EDITING                              vocabulary highly appropriate       vocabulary very           and vocabulary            style and                  incomprehensible
                                         to purpose, audience and            appropriate to purpose,   appropriate to            vocabulary not           - Tone, register, style
Tone, register, style,                   context                             audience and context.     purpose, audience         appropriate to             and vocabulary less
vocabulary appropriate                 - Language confident,               - Language is effective and and context.              purpose, audience          appropriate to
to purpose/effect and                    exceptionally impressive –                                  - Appropriate use of
                                                                             a consistently appropriate                          and context.               purpose, audience
context                                  compelling and rhetorically         tone is used.             language to convey      - Very basic use of          and context
Word choice                              effective in tone.                - Largely error-free in     meaning.                  language.                - Vocabulary
Language use and                       - Virtually error-free in grammar     grammar and spelling.   - Tone is appropriate.    - Tone and diction           limitations so
conventions,                             and spelling.                     - Very well crafted.      - Rhetorical devices        are inappropriate.         extreme as to make
punctuation, grammar,                  - Highly skilfully crafted.                                     used to enhance         - Very limited               comprehension
spelling                                                                                               content.                  vocabulary.                impossible
15 MARKS                                                 13                              10                        7                        4
                                       - Language excellent and          - Language engaging and     - Adequate use of         - Inadequate use of
                                         rhetorically effective in tone.   generally effective         language with some        language.

                         Lower level
                                       - Virtually error-free in grammar - Appropriate and effective   inconsistencies.        - Little or no variety
                                         and spelling.                     tone.                     - Tone generally            in sentence.
                                       - Skilfully crafted.              - Few errors in grammar and appropriate and           - Exceptionally
                                                                           spelling.                   limited use of            limited vocabulary.
                                                                         - Well-crafted                rhetorical devices.
                                                          5                               4                        3                      2                         0–1
STRUCTURE
Features of text                       - Excellent development of topic - Logical development of     - Relevant details        - Some valid points        - Necessary points
Paragraph                              - Exceptional detail                details                     developed               - Sentences and              lacking
development and                        - Sentences, paragraphs           - Coherent                  - Sentences,                paragraphs faulty        - Sentences and
sentence                                 exceptionally well-constructed - Sentences, paragraphs        paragraphs well-        - Essay still makes          paragraphs faulty
construction                                                               logical, varied             constructed               sense despite
5 MARKS                                                                                              - Essay still makes         flaws.
                                                                                                       some sense
  MARKS RANGE                                          40–50                           30–39                    20–29                  10–19                        0–9

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SECTION B: ASSESSMENT RUBRIC FOR LONGER TRANSACTIONAL TEXT – ADDITIONAL LANGUAGE [30 marks]

 Criteria                 Exceptional                          Skilful                        Moderate                Elementary              Inadequate
                                         15–18                           11–14                          8–10                   5–7                        0-–4
     CONTENT              - Outstanding response beyond        - Very good response       -    Adequate response - Basic response             - Response reveals
   PLANNING AND             normal expectations                  demonstrating good            demonstrating            demonstrating             no knowledge of
      FORMAT              - Intelligent and mature ideas         knowledge of features         knowledge of             some knowledge            features of the type
                          - -Extensive knowledge of              of the type of text.          features of the type     of features of the        of text
 (Response and              features of the type of text       - Maintains focus – no          of text.                 type of text.         - Meaning is obscure
 ideas)                   - Writing maintains focus              digressions.             -    Not completely        - Some focus but             with major
 Organisation of          - Coherence in content and           - Coherent in content           focused – some           writing digresses.        digressions.
 ideas for planning         ideas.                               and ideas, very well          digressions.          - Not always coherent - Not coherent in
 Purpose, audience        - Highly elaborated and all            elaborated and details   -    Reasonably               in content and            content and ideas.
 and                        details support the topic            support topic.                coherent in content      ideas.                - Very few details
 features/conventions     - Appropriate and accurate           - Appropriate format            and ideas             - Few details support        support the topic.
 and context                format                               with minor               -    Some details             the topic.            - Has not applied
                                                                 inaccuracies.                 support the topic     - Has vaguely                necessary rules of
 18 MARKS                                                                                 -    Generally                applied necessary         format.
                                                                                               appropriate format       rules of format
                                                                                               but with some         - Some critical
                                                                                               inaccuracies.            oversights.
                                         10–12                            8–9                           6–7                    4–5                        0–3
     LANGUAGE,            - Tone, register, style,        -      Tone, register, style    -    Tone, register, style  - Tone, register, style - Tone, register, style
     STYLE AND              vocabulary highly appropriate        and vocabulary very           and vocabulary         and vocabulary less       and vocabulary do not
       EDITING              to purpose, audience and             appropriate to                appropriate to         appropriate to            correspond to
                            context.                             purpose, audience             purpose, audience      purpose, audience         purpose, audience
 Tone, register, style,   - Grammatically accurate and           and context                   and context.           and context               and context.
 purpose/effect,            well-constructed              -      Generally,               -    Some grammatical       -Inaccurate grammar - Error-ridden and
 audience and             - Virtually error-free.                grammatically                 errors                 with numerous             confused
 context                                                         accurate and well-       -    Adequate               errors                  - Vocabulary not
 Language use and                                                constructed                   vocabulary             -Limited vocabulary       suitable for purpose
 conventions.                                              -     Very good vocabulary     -    Errors do not impede -Meaning is obscured. - Meaning seriously
 Word choice                                               -      Mostly free of errors        meaning                                          impaired
 Punctuation, spelling

 12 MARKS
   MARKS RANGE                          25–30                            19–23                       14–17                     9–12                     0–7

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SECTION C: ASSESSMENT RUBRIC FOR SHORTER TRANSACTIONAL TEXT – ADDITIONAL LANGUAGE [20 marks]
 Criteria                 Exceptional                       Skilful                    Moderate                  Elementary              Inadequate
                                         10–12                         8–9                        6–7                     4–5                        0–3
                          - Outstanding response beyond     - Very good response       - Adequate response       - Basic response        -   Response reveals
                            normal expectations               demonstrating good         demonstrating             demonstrating             no knowledge of
       CONTENT            - Intelligent and mature ideas      knowledge of features      knowledge of              some knowledge            features of the type
     PLANNING AND         - -Extensive knowledge of           of the type of text.       features of the type      of features of the        of text
        FORMAT              features of the type of text    - Maintains focus – no       of text.                  type of text.         -   Meaning is obscure
                          - Writing maintains focus           digressions.             - Not completely          - Some focus but            with major
 (Response and            - Coherence in content and        - Coherent in content        focused – some            writing digresses.        digressions.
 ideas)                     ideas.                            and ideas, very well       digressions.            - Not always coherent -     Not coherent in
 Organisation of          - Highly elaborated and all         elaborated and details   - Reasonably                in content and            content and ideas.
 ideas for planning         details support the topic         support topic.             coherent in content       ideas.                    Very few details
 Purpose, audience        - Appropriate and accurate        - Appropriate format         and ideas               - Few details support       support the topic.
 and                        format                            with minor               - Some details              the topic.            -   Has not applied
 features/conventions                                         inaccuracies.              support the topic       - -Has vaguely              necessary rules of
 and context                                                                           - Generally                 applied necessary         format.
                                                                                         appropriate format        rules of format
       12 MARKS                                                                          but with some           - -Some critical
                                                                                         inaccuracies.             oversights.
                                          7–8                          5–6                         4                        3                        0–2
      LANGUAGE,           - Tone, register, style,          - Tone, register, style    - Tone, register, style   - Tone, register, style -   Tone, register, style
      STYLE AND             vocabulary highly appropriate     and vocabulary very        and vocabulary            and vocabulary less       and vocabulary do
        EDITING             to purpose, audience and          appropriate to             appropriate to            appropriate to            not correspond to
                            context.                          purpose, audience          purpose, audience         purpose, audience         purpose, audience
 Tone, register, style,   - Grammatically accurate and        and context                and context.              and context               and context.
 purpose/effect,            well-constructed                - Generally,               - Some grammatical        - Inaccurate            -   Error-ridden and
 audience and             - Virtually error-free.             grammatically              errors                    grammar with              confused
 context                                                      accurate and well-       - Adequate                  numerous errors       -   Vocabulary not
 Language use and                                             constructed                vocabulary              - Limited vocabulary        suitable for purpose
 conventions.                                               - Very good vocabulary     - Errors do not impede    - -Meaning is           -   -Meaning seriously
 Word choice                                                - Mostly free of errors.     meaning.                  obscured.                 obscured
 Punctuation, spelling

       8 MARKS
     MARKS RANGE                        17–20                         13–15                    10–11                     7–8                        0–5

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