# English FAL Grade 12 Paper 2 Eastern Cape Mock 2023 Memo

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NATIONAL
                  SENIOR CERTIFICATE

                           GRADE 12

                   SEPTEMBER 2023

    ENGLISH FIRST ADDITIONAL LANGUAGE P2
              MARKING GUIDELINE

MARKS:   70

              This marking guideline consists of 20 pages.

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2                    ENGLISH FIRST ADDITIONAL LANGUAGE P2                   (EC/SEPTEMBER 2023)

INSTRUCTIONS AND INFORMATION

1.    Candidates are required to answer questions from TWO sections.

2.    These marking guidelines are merely a guide to assess learners’ responses.

3.    Candidates' responses should be assessed as objectively as possible.

4.    MARKING GUIDELINES

      4.1    A candidate may not answer more than ONE question on the same genre.

      4.2    If a candidate gives two answers where the first one is wrong and the next
             one is correct, mark the first answer and ignore the next.

      4.3    If answers are incorrectly numbered, mark according to the marking
             guidelines.

      4.4    If a spelling error affects the meaning, mark incorrect. If it does not affect
             the meaning, mark correct.

      4.5    If the candidate does not use inverted commas when asked to quote, do
             not penalise.

      4.6    For open-ended questions, no marks should be awarded for YES/NO or I
             AGREE/I DISAGREE. The reason/substantiation/motivation is what should
             be considered.

      4.7    No marks should be awarded for TRUE/FALSE or FACT/OPINION. The
             reason/substantiation/motivation is what should be considered.

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SECTION A: NOVEL

NOTE:     Candidates are required to answer ONE question on the novel they have
          studied.

QUESTION 1: CRY, THE BELOVED COUNTRY

Candidates are required to answer BOTH questions, i.e. QUESTIONS 1.1
and 1.2.

1.1   1.1.1    (a)    E/conservative ✓
               (b)    C/liberal ✓
               (c)    A/selfish ✓
               (d)    B/naïve ✓                                                             (4)

      1.1.2    (a)    Reverend Kumalo wants to buy a stove for his wife. ✓
                      Mrs Kumalo wants her husband to buy his church clothes. ✓
                      Reverend Kumalo wants to use it for travelling to Johannesburg.
                      ✓                                                                    (2)

                      NOTE: Accept any TWO of the above.

               (b)    To further his education. OR St. Chad’s offers the best education
                      for black children. ✓                                                (1)

      1.1.3    A/high school. ✓                                                            (1)

      1.1.4    (a)    troubled/distressed ✓                                                 (1)

               (b)    He does not want to believe that their only son will never come
                      back. / He had hoped that Absalom would come back and still go
                      to school. ✓                                                          (1)

      1.1.5    Mrs Kumalo is sensible/rational. ✓ She has since realised that their
               son would never come back/would not go to school. ✓                          (2)

      1.1.6    Absalom goes to look for his aunt whose whereabouts are not known
               because she never writes to them. However, when Absalom goes to
               Johannesburg he also does not write back and his whereabouts are
               not known. ✓✓

               NOTE: Both parts must be included to earn marks.                             (2)

      1.1.7    Open-ended.

               Accept a relevant response which shows an understanding of the
               following viewpoints, among others:

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                Yes.

                • Absalom is from a protected rural life of Ndotsheni and it has made
                  him naïve to the harsh life of the city.
                • He goes to Johannesburg in the first place because of his family, in
                  search of his aunt.
                • The hopelessness of life in Ndotsheni for young people (no job
                  opportunities) makes him stay in Johannesburg.

                                                          OR

                No.

                •     Absalom’s actions do not reflect that he comes from a God-
                      fearing family.
                •     He is sent for rehabilitation and he is offered a job but he leaves.
                •     He chooses not to communicate with his parents although he was
                      sent to look for his aunt.

                NOTE:      Do NOT award a mark for YES or NO.
                           Credit responses where a combination is given. For full
                           marks, the response must be well substantiated. A
                           candidate can score 1 or 2 marks for a response which is
                           not well substantiated. The candidate’s interpretation must
                           be grounded in the novel.                                          (3)

                                                   AND

1.2    1.2.1    In Kumalo’s home/room, ✓ after the confirmation celebrations by
                church members. ✓                                                              (2)

       1.2.2    He senses that Kumalo feels guilty ✓ and thinks that his wife’s death
                is as a result of Arthur’s death who was killed by Absalom. ✓                  (2)

       1.2.3    (a)     Metaphor ✓                                                             (1)

                (b)     Reverend Kumalo compares Jarvis’s letter to an answer from
                        God. ✓ Jarvis’s letter brings comfort to Kumalo’s broken,
                        anxious heart in the same way God gives peace to our troubled
                        hearts. ✓                                                              (2)

       1.2.4    He is mocking/ridiculing Kumalo disbelief/curious. ✓
                He is curious to know who the letter is coming from and the news it
                carries.
                He is mocking Kumalo who says the letter is from God (because God
                does not write letters). ✓                                                     (2)

       1.2.5    The Bishop thinks that Reverend Kumalo is a disgrace as a priest in
                Ndotsheni. ✓ His son is a murderer / He took a girl in that was
                impregnated by his son out of wedlock. ✓/ He thinks it will be easier
                for Kumalo to leave, as his neighbour is the father of the man
                Absalom murdered. ✓                                                            (2)
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      1.2.6    The Jarvis family went to Johannesburg on the news of their son’s
               death. ✓                                                                  (1)

      1.2.7    The discussion of the theme of faith should include the following
               points, among others:

               • Kumalo has strong faith in God even in adverse conditions of
                 Ndotsheni and of his personal life.
               • When his son is to be hanged, he does not lose faith he still has
                 courage to go and pray in the mountain.
               • He believes his prayers are answered by God when Jarvis offers to
                 help the people in Ndotsheni.

               NOTE:    For full marks, the response must be well-substantiated. A
                        candidate can score 1 or 2 marks for a response which is
                        not well-substantiated. The candidate’s interpretation must
                        be grounded in the novel.                                        (3)

      1.2.8    Open ended.

               Accept a relevant response which shows an understanding of the
               following viewpoints, among others:

               Yes.
               • Jarvis chooses not to be bitter and angry following Arthur’s death.
               • He offers financial help and plans support for Kumalo and the
                 entire community of Ndotsheni.
               • He continues with his son’s work by helping the Ndotsheni
                 community.

                                               OR

               No.
               • Jarvis acts out of guilt because he has been ignorant of the
                 distressed life of the Ndotsheni community.
               • The heavy storm makes him realise that the church must be
                 renovated.
               • Arthur’s death forces him to have a better understanding of black
                 people.

               NOTE:    Do not award a mark for YES or NO. Credit responses
                        where a combination is given. For full marks, the response
                        must be well-substantiated. A candidate can score 1 or 2
                        marks for a response which is not well-substantiated. The
                        candidate’s response must be grounded in the novel.              (3)

                                                               TOTAL SECTION A:          35

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QUESTION 2: STRANGE CASE OF DR JEKYLL AND MR HYDE
Candidates are required to answer BOTH questions, i.e. QUESTIONS 2.1 AND 2.2.
2.1   2.1.1   (a)      D/smooth-faced ✓
              (b)      C/dwarfish ✓
              (c)      A/lean ✓
              (d)      B/red-faced ✓                                                                (4)
      2.1.2   The setting is a by-street/London ✓ on a Sunday afternoon. ✓                          (2)
      2.1.3   Utterson and Enfield are distant relatives. ✓
              They have been friends for a long time. ✓                                             (2)
      2.1.4   (a)      Simile ✓                                                                     (1)

              (b)      Enfield compares the emptiness of the streets ✓ to a lack of
                       Christian values (at that time of morning) represented by empty
                       churches. ✓                                                                  (2)
      2.1.5   A/Hyde ✓                                                                              (1)

      2.1.6   (a)      The little man pays the family with a cheque that is signed by
                       someone else / with Dr Jekyll’s name. ✓

              (b)      He means the whole scene was horrible / unbelievable. ✓ The man
                       had no sense of wrongdoing. / The man acted like a demon or
                       animal. ✓                                                                    (1)

      2.1.7   Open-ended.

              Accept a relevant response which shows an understanding of the
              following viewpoints among others:

              Yes.

              • Mr Utterson does not tell the police of his suspicion about Sir Danver’s
                murder to protect his friend, Dr Jekyll.
              • As a friend he is more concerned about Dr Jekyll’s safety and protects
                him against Mr Hyde.
              • He does not tell the police about the Mr Hyde and Dr Jekyll’s
                relationship/connection.

                                                     OR

              No.

              •       Mr Utterson, as a lawyer, wants to get facts about Dr Jekyll’s
                      connection with Mr Hyde.
              •       He is professional enough not to read the contents of Dr Jekyll’ will.
              •       He only opens letters (from his friends) when they were dead.

              NOTE:        Do NOT award a mark for YES or NO. Credit responses where
                           a combination is given. For full marks, the response must be
                           well-substantiated. A candidate can score 1 or 2 marks for a
                           response which is not well substantiated. The candidate’s                (3)

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                        response must be grounded in the novel.

                                                  AND

2.2   2.2.1    (a)    Dr Jekyll is certain that Mr Hyde has disappeared because he
                      himself is Mr Hyde and he thinks he is in control, yet he loses
                      control over Hyde at the end. ✓✓

                      NOTE: Both parts must be included to earn marks.                          (2)

               (b)    Dr Jekyll prefers to be himself and enjoys the company of his
                      friends ✓ / the reputation he has in the society. ✓
                                                     OR

                      He prefers to be Mr Hyde who is young. ✓ livelier or enjoying
                      secret pleasure without consequences. ✓

                      NOTE: Accept any ONE of the above.                                        (2)

      2.2.2    (a)    anxious / desperate / uncertain ✓                                         (1)

               (b)    Dr Jekyll uses a letter he wrote as Mr Hyde to convince Mr
                      Utterson that Mr Hyde is gone and will not be found. ✓                    (1)

      2.2.3    He is concerned/worried. ✓ If Mr Hyde is caught Dr Jekyll’s name will
               come up. ✓                                                                       (2)

      2.2.4    Dr Jekyll refers to Sir Carew’s murder (that he has committed). ✓                (1)

      2.2.5    He discovers that the letter and an invitation from Dr Jekyll have been
               written by the same person only differently sloped. / The letter was
               written by Dr Jekyll to cover up for Mr Hyde. ✓                                  (1)

      2.2.6    He is deceitful /dishonest. ✓ Dr Jekyll lies and plays with Utterson’s
               friendship and understanding / Dr Jekyll lies to Mr Utterson about
               Mr Hyde. ✓                                                                       (2)

      2.2.7    The discussion of the theme of secrecy should include the following
               points, among others:

               • Enfield is telling Utterson about a horrible story that he witnessed but
                 he chooses not to mention Dr Jekyll’s name.
               • Utterson is very secretive about Dr Jekyll and Mr Hyde’s relationship
                 that he does not tell the police about the walking stick Mr Hyde used
                 to kill Sir Carew.
               • It is only when Dr Jekyll dies that Utterson learns the truth about Dr
                 Lanyon.

                NOTE:      For full marks, the response must be well-substantiated. A
                           candidate can score 1 or 2 marks for a response which is not
                           well-substantiated. The candidate’s interpretation must be
                           grounded in the novel.                                                (3)

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      2.2.8    Open ended.

               Accept a relevant response which shows understanding of the
               following viewpoints, among others:

               Yes.
               • Mr Hyde helps Dr Jekyll to live a double life.
               • Dr Jekyll wants to explore his dark side through Mr Hyde and not be
                 bound by conscience.
               • He created Mr Hyde so he can maintain his reputation whilst doing
                 as he pleases.

                                               OR

               No.
               • Dr Jekyll as a scientist has to conduct experiments.
               • Experiments have unpredictable outcomes as in the case of
                 Mr Hyde.
               • Dr Jekyll is also overwhelmed by Mr Hyde who dominates and
                 takes control of his life.

               NOTE:    Do not award a mark for YES or NO. Credit responses
                        where a combination is given. For full marks, the response
                        must be well-substantiated. A candidate can score 1 or 2
                        marks for a response which is well substantiated. The
                        candidate’s response must be grounded in the novel.              (3)
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                                                               TOTAL SECTION A:          35

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SECTION B: DRAMA

QUESTION 3: MACBETH

NOTE:     Candidates are required to answer ONE question on the drama they have
          studied.

Candidates are required to answer BOTH questions, i.e. QUESTIONS 3.1 AND 3.2.

3.1    3.1.1    (a)    D/honest ✓
                (b)    C/vengeful ✓
                (c)    A/gullible ✓
                (d)    B/manipulative ✓                                                         (4)

       3.1.2    The setting is in a heath / veld (near Forres) ✓ after the battle / after the
                witches’ first appearance to Macbeth. ✓                                         (2)

       3.1.3    (a)    Simile/Metaphor ✓                                                        (1)

                (b)    From what the witches have told him, Macbeth is excited ✓as in
                       his mind his future is like a play, where he sees himself playing
                       the role of a king / he sees himself like a king. ✓                      (2)

       3.1.4    The previous Thane of Cawdor is executed for betraying his country. ✓           (1)

       3.1.5    Macbeth is apprehensive/nervous. ✓ He finds out that the witches have
                told him the truth but is nervous about how he will be the king. ✓              (2)

       3.1.6    Macbeth is greedy. ✓ He holds two titles, but he is still contemplating
                being a king when he knows that he cannot be a king. ✓                          (2)

       3.1.7    Open-ended.
                Accept a relevant response which shows an understanding of the
                following viewpoints, among others:
                Yes.
                • The witches promised Macbeth kingship knowing that he does not
                  deserve it / he is not the King’s successor.
                • They told Banquo that his sons will be kings motivating Banquo’s
                  murder.
                • Macbeth’s courage to fight Macduff (when he sees that his army is
                  already defeated by Malcolm’s) is driven by the prophecy that ‘no
                  man born out of a woman’ will kill him.

                                                    OR

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               No.
               • Before the witches’ prophecy, Macbeth is used to killing as a warrior.
               • He is known for his fearless nature when it comes to war.
               • He is praised by other soldiers for fighting bravely and killing soldiers
                 on the opposite side.

               NOTE:     Do NOT award a mark for YES or NO. Credit responses
                         where a combination is given. For full marks, the response
                         must be well-substantiated. A candidate can score 1 or 2
                         marks for a response which is not well-substantiated. The
                         candidate’s interpretation must be grounded in the drama.             (3)

                                                 AND

3.2 3.2.1      (a)   Deceitful/convincing ✓                                                    (1)

               (b)   He wants the murderers to have a tangible reason for killing
                     Banquo. / He does not want the murders to suspect him. ✓                  (1)

               (c)   Macbeth tells the murderers that he has been innocent yet he is
                     now deceiving them into believing that Banquo is bad. ✓✓

                     NOTE: Both parts must be included to earn marks.                          (2)

      3.2.2    Macbeth should move closer to them. ✓
               He should put his hands on their shoulders. ✓
               He should look at them with raised eyebrows. ✓

               NOTE: Accept any other relevant actions.                                        (2)

      3.2.3    Banquo has a reason to suspect that Macbeth killed King Duncan
               because he knows about the witches’ prophecy. ✓ Banquo was told
               that his sons will be kings. ✓                                                  (2)

      3.2.4    Banquo has dehumanised the murderers and their families by reducing
               them to nothing. ✓ He has oppressed them. ✓                                     (2)

      3.2.5    C / men who take revenge ✓                                                      (1)

      3.2.6    He sends another murderer (without their knowledge) to join them. ✓             (1)

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      3.2.7    The discussion of the theme of disruption of order and its
               consequences should include the following points, among others:
               •   The murder of King Duncan brings disorder in Scotland.
               •   Macbeth has sleepless nights because of the murder of King
                   Duncan and he does not enjoy his title.
               •   He kills Macduff’s family and he pays dearly at the end.

               NOTE:    For full marks, the response must be well-substantiated.
                        A candidate can score 1or 2 marks for a response which is
                        not well-substantiated. The candidate’s interpretation must be
                        grounded in the drama.                                             (3)

      3.2.8    Open-ended.

               Accept a relevant response which shows and understanding of the
               following viewpoints, among others:

               Yes.
               • Banquo is a threat to Macbeth as his sons were prophesied to be
                   kings by the witches.
               • He knows about the witches’ prophecy of Macbeth being a king.
               • Macbeth cannot trust Banquo anymore and organises murderers to
                   kill him.

                                                OR

               No.
                  •   Banquo does not take the witches’ prophecies seriously.
                  •   He supports Macbeth as a new king.
                  •   He continues to be Macbeth’s loyal friend.

               NOTE:    Do NOT award a mark for YES or NO. Credit responses
                        where a combination is given. For full marks, the response
                        must be well-substantiated. A candidate can score 1 or 2
                        marks for a response which is not well-substantiated. The
                        candidate’s interpretation must be grounded in the drama.          (3)
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QUESTION 4: MY CHILDREN! MY AFRICA!

4.1    4.1.1    (a)   D / sees education as a trap. ✓
                (b)   C / gives standard ten his pep talk. ✓
                (c)   B / is blind to the daily struggles. ✓
                (d)   A / devotes his life to education. ✓                                    (4)

       4.1.2    Camdeboo High School/Isabel’s school/classroom ✓ when Mr M
                informs Isabel about the English literature quiz. ✓                           (2)

       4.1.3    She is white, ✓ and she is used to black people being nice and polite to
                her. ✓                                                                        (2)

       4.1.4    (a)   Metaphor ✓                                                              (1)

                (b)   Mr M reflects on how education (debate) can transform people’s
                      lives (Isabel) and help overcome social divisions by simply meeting
                      people from another group.
                      (Thami / Zolile High learners) ✓ to get rid of fear and get a better
                      understanding. ✓                                                        (2)

       4.1.5    Thami pulls out of the quiz competition. ✓                                    (1)

       4.1.6    Mr M values education / knowledge. ✓ He is passionate about his
                students. / He does everything in his power to inspire his students. ✓

                                                   OR

                He is authoritarian. ✓ He does not expect Thami to argue with what he
                says. ✓                                                                       (2)

       4.1.7    Open-ended.

                Accept a relevant response which shows an understanding of the
                following viewpoints, among others:

                Yes.
                • Mr M’s approach comes from the cultural background which brings
                    the idea that children must obey adults.
                • Mr M believes his approach instils discipline.
                • His approach emphasises the fact that children are not allowed to
                    take any decisions.

                                                   OR

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               No.

                      •   Mr M’s approach does not allow students to be open.
                      •   It is dictatorial / does not allow his authority to be challenged.
                      •   It leads to misunderstanding between Mr M and Thami.

               NOTE:         Do NOT award a mark for YES or NO. Credit responses
                             where a combination is given. For full marks, the response
                             must be well-substantiated. A candidate can score 1 or 2
                             marks for a response which is not well-substantiated. The
                             candidate’s interpretation must be grounded in the drama.                   (3)

                                                       AND

4.2   4.2.1    (a)        Mocking/ridicule/sarcastic ✓                                                   (1)

               (b)        Mr M does not believe that Thami has abandoned his teaching to
                          join the freedom fighters that promote violence. ✓                             (1)

      4.2.2    Mr M is supposed to forsake his old ways/noneffective ways of fighting
               freedom ✓and join forces with the freedom fighters and fight
               physically. ✓                                                                             (2)

      4.2.3    Mr M should move closer to Thami as he speaks.✓
               He should open his eyes wide / look at Thami with a frown. ✓
               He should point a finger at Thami. ✓

               NOTE: Accept any other relevant actions.                                                  (2)

      4.2.4    B / Black South Africans ✓                                                                (1)

      4.2.5    The Afrikaner/Apartheid government ✓                                                      (1)

      4.2.6    Mr M is distraught. ✓ He does not believe that his intelligent student
               Thami is aligning himself with vandalism. ✓                                               (2)

      4.2.7    Mr M dedicates his entire life in educating children with an emphasis on
               the fact that conflicts are better solved through discussion than
               violence, yet the mob with his learners kills him at school. ✓✓

               NOTE: Both parts must be included to earn marks.                                          (2)

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      4.2.8    The discussion of the theme of generational conflict should include the
               following viewpoints, among others:

               • Thami is in conflict with Mr M about his approach to fight apartheid
                 which Thami finds to be old fashioned and has yielded no results.
               • Mr M is authoritative; he expects that Thami should do as he says
                 because he is the teacher.
               • His dictatorship puts a strain on their relationship because Thami has
                 his own opinions that are not considered.

               NOTE:      For full marks, the response must be well-substantiated.
                          A candidate can score 1 or 2 marks for a response which is
                          not well-substantiated. The candidate’s interpretation must be
                          grounded in the drama.                                              (3)

      4.2.9    Open-ended.

               Accept a relevant response which shows an understanding of the
               following viewpoints among others:

               Yes.

               •     Thami has realised that black children are receiving inferior
                     education and there is no future for them.
               •     Staying does not guarantee that he will go to school as there are
                     violent uprisings that may lead to jail or death.
               •     He sees that becoming part of the freedom fighters is the only way
                     to end apartheid.

                                                  OR

               No.

               •     Thami could have proceeded with his education as he is the top
                     achiever.
               •     Mr M was organising a scholarship for him which could have taken
                     him to better universities.
               •     He wasted his life because he ends up avoiding possible arrest by
                     leaving the country.

               NOTE:      Do NOT award a mark for YES or NO. Credit response where
                          a combination is given. For full marks, the response must be
                          well-substantiated. A candidate can score 1 or 2 marks for a
                          response which is not well-substantiated. The candidate’s
                          interpretation must be grounded in the drama.                       (3)
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                                                                   TOTAL SECTION B:          35

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SECTION C: SHORT STORIES

QUESTION 5

NOTE:     Candidates are required to answer BOTH questions set on the TWO short
          stories they have studied i.e. QUESTIONS 5.1 AND 5.2.

QUESTION 5.1: ‘Class Act’

5.1    5.1.1    (a)     D/a nun in a film ✓
                (b)     C/a class bully ✓
                (c)     E/a fashion designer ✓
                (d)     A/an English teacher ✓                                                    (4)

       5.1.2    The narrator is extremely anxious. ✓ She realises that she has made
                things worse by shortening her uniform. ✓                                         (2)

       5.1.3    The narrator’s sister, Ayanda, sewed the hem. ✓                                   (1)

       5.1.4    The narrator’s uniform makes her look like a nun in the movie. ✓
                Although her dress is short now, Renato tells her that she is still
                unsophisticated and old-fashioned. ✓                                              (2)

       5.1.5    (a)    Metaphor ✓                                                                 (1)

                (b)    The ridiculous white stitches on her uniform show how wide the
                       hem is (to shorten her long dress) ✓ and it looks similar to a wide
                       path/road/track leading somewhere. ✓                                       (2)

       5.1.6    He is insensitive. ✓ he does not care if the narrator is hurt or humiliated
                by what he is saying. ✓                                                           (2)

       5.1.7    Open-ended.

                Accept a relevant response which shows an understanding of the
                following viewpoints, among others:

                Yes.

                • Renato, as an old student, sees it proper to initiate the narrator as she
                  is new in the school.
                • He does it as an acceptable norm that is known by teachers as well.
                • Renato gets power from being a bully because he struggles
                  academically.

                                                   OR

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               No.

               • Newcomer’s initiation humiliates new learners, like the narrator, when
                 they are laughed at.
               • The narrator feels helpless as she receives negative comments.
               • Renato is still young and must respect other learners including the
                 narrator who is new.

               NOTE:     Do NOT award a mark for YES or NO. Credit responses where
                         a combination is given. For full marks, the response must be
                         well-substantiated. A candidate can score 1 or 2 marks for a
                         response which is not well-substantiated. The candidate’s
                         interpretation must be grounded in the story.                        (3)

                                                  AND

      5.2.1    The setting is Noordgesig Primary School/school ✓ before the school
               starts/after Freddie puts Meneer Carelse’s bag in his class. ✓                 (2)

      5.2.2    (a)   Naytif/Native is a term which used to refer to Africans during the
                     apartheid period/a Black person. ✓                                       (1)

               (b)   Bobby’s sister is a coloured, ✓ and during the apartheid period
                     inter-racial relationships were illegal / Blacks were regarded as the
                     most inferior race that no one race wanted to be associated
                     with. ✓                                                                  (2)

      5.2.3    D/cinema ✓                                                                     (1)

      5.2.4    (a)   shameful/angry/upset ✓                                                   (1)

               (b)   Bobby does not want to believe the scandalous rumour that his
                     sister has a native boyfriend. /He is ashamed/unsettled that his
                     sister is being accused of having an affair with a native. ✓             (1)

      5.2.5    Davie does not like his sister having a relationship with Michael who is
               black, yet he has a child with Salome, Michael’s sister. ✓✓

               NOTE: Both parts must be included to earn marks.                               (2)

      5.2.6    The principal knows that this information is going to cause trouble for the
               families. ✓ The school cannot be found as part of disclosing such
               sensitive information. ✓                                                       (2)

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      5.2.7    The discussion of the theme of defiance should include the following
               viewpoints, among others:

               •      Dora’s relationship with Michael becomes well-known and is
                      despised by a lot of Coloured folks, yet she continues seeing
                      Michael.
               •      Davie’s mother defies her husband when she insists on seeing
                      her grandchild.
               •      Salome defies Davie when she tells his family about their
                      relationship and child.

               NOTE:       For full marks, the response must be well-substantiated.
                           A candidate can score 1or 2 marks for a response which is
                           not well-substantiated. The candidate’s interpretation must
                           be grounded in the story.

      5.2.8    Open-ended.

               Accept a relevant response which shows an understanding of the
               following viewpoints, among others:

               Yes.
               • The apartheid government did not allow mixed race relationships
               • Davie cannot disclose that he has a child with Salome who is
                   black.
               • He fears being judged by his coloured community.

                                                  OR

               No.

               •      Davie is a hypocrite who insists on hiding his relationship with
                      Salome.
               •      Dora and Michael continue to love each other despite being ill-
                      treated.
               •      Davie (coloured) and Salome (black) have a healthy child though
                      they are different races.

               NOTE:       Do not award marks for YES or NO only.
                           Credit response where a combination is given. For full
                           marks, the response must be well-substantiated. A
                           candidate can score 1 or 2 for a response which is not well-
                           substantiated. The candidate’s response must be grounded
                           in the short story.                                               (3)
                                                                                            [35]

                                                                  TOTAL SECTION C:               35

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SECTION D: POETRY

NOTE: Candidates are required to answer ALL the questions.

QUESTION 6.1: ‘Reciprocities’ by Cathal Lagan

6.1   6.1.1    (a)     C / a length of wool ✓
               (b)     A / a directive in mass ✓
               (c)     D / breaks in concentration ✓
               (d)     E / pictures in imagination ✓                                         (4)

      6.1.2    (a)     Simile ✓                                                              (1)

               (b)     The poet is ordered to hold wool with his arms lifted up ✓ as the
                       priest would do when giving a blessing in church. ✓               (2)

      6.1.3    (a)     C / firm ✓                                                            (1)

               (b)     Nostalgic/admiringly ✓                                                (1)

               (c)     The speaker is looking back at the time/remembering when he was
                       young and would help his mother (in making balls of wool). ✓    (1)

      6.1.4    The speaker is sentimental, ✓ as he thinks fondly of the past, feeling a
               connection with his mother like the time when they used to work
               together/as he remembers the time spent with his mother/the jersey she
               would knit him. ✓                                                             (2)

      6.1.5    It is similar in the sense that the knitting begins with one stitch and the
               poem also begins with one word, ✓ but they both get to being a whole
               (poem and jersey). ✓                                                        (2)

      6.1.6    Open-ended.

               Accept a relevant response which shows an understanding of the
               following viewpoints among others:

               Yes.

               •      The speaker remembers how he used to help his mother with
                      wounding which in turn made him a jersey.
               •      He remembers the talks with his mother which have built their
                      relationship.
               •      He uses the skills he gained (being attentive and patient) to write
                      poetry.

                                                       OR

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              No.

              • The speaker has no choice but to hold the wool.
              • His attention wonders because as a child he wants to be somewhere
                and play.
              • He does not attach any value to what he is doing with his mother.

              NOTE:        Do NOT award a mark for YES or NO. Credit responses where
                           a combination is given. For full marks, the response must be
                           well-substantiated. A candidate can score 1 or 2 marks for a
                           response which is not well-substantiated. The candidate’s
                           interpretation must be grounded in the poem.                             (3)

                                               AND

QUESTION 6.2: ON THE GRASSHOPPER AND CRICKET by John Keats

6.2 6.2.1     (a)      Italian/Petrarchan sonnet ✓                                                  (1)

              (b)      The poem is divided into two stanzas ✓ / Octave – first 8 lines and
                       sestet – six last lines ✓
                       It has an abbaabba cdecde rhyme scheme ✓                                     (2)

     6.2.2    Nature’s music is not confined to a particular season (e.g. Spring). ✓
              There is sound all year round even during harsh conditions. ✓                         (2)

     6.2.3    The setting is outdoors/in a field ✓ on a hot summer’s day/when the
              grasshopper is having fun. ✓                                                          (2)

     6.2.4    In winter (when everything seems quiet) there is a sound of a cricket. ✓              (1)

     6.2.5    (a)      C / personification ✓                                                        (1)

              (b)      The speaker’s sleepiness makes the cricket sound like a
                       grasshopper. ✓                                                               (1)

     6.2.6    The poet describes the two insects as bringing happiness to those
              around them, yet these can be annoying to some people. ✓✓

              NOTE: Both parts must be included to earn marks.                                      (2)

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     6.2.7   The discussion of the theme of happiness that nature provides should
             include the following viewpoints, among others:

              • The happiness brought by nature is through music which is all year
                round.
              • In harsh seasons like summer when all other animals are tired there is
                a grasshopper that delightfully brings music.
              • When it is all quiet and cold from frost the cricket brings joy into the
                houses by producing its own music.

             NOTE:     For full marks, the response must be well-substantiated.
                       A candidate can score 1 or 2 marks for a response which is not
                       well-substantiated. The candidate’s interpretation must be
                       grounded in the poem.                                                 (3)

     6.2.8   Open-ended.

             Accept a relevant response which shows an understanding of the
             following viewpoints, among others:

             Yes.
             • The speaker uses insects to depict the pleasantness of the sounds
               made by nature in summer and winter.
             • The grasshopper and the cricket take the lead during the harsh
               conditions of winter and summer when other animals cannot
               withstand such conditions.
             • Nature does not go into dormancy because of the harsh conditions.

                                                 OR

             No.
             • In winter and summer, the grasshopper and the cricket can be the
               most irritating insects to be around.
             • In Spring all birds and insects are active as the weather conditions
               are not too harsh.
             • During this season birds and insects make beautiful sounds.

             NOTE:     Do not award marks for YES or NO only.
                       Credit response where a combination is given. For full marks,
                       the responses must be well-substantiated. A candidate can
                       score 1 or 2 marks for a response which is not well-
                       substantiated. The candidate’s response must be grounded in
                       the poem.                                                             (3)
                                                                                            [35]

                                                                  TOTAL SECTION D:            35
                                                                     GRAND TOTAL:             70

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