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English Home Language/P2
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NOTE TO MARKERS
• These marking guidelines are intended as a guide for markers.
• The marking guidelines will be discussed with the marking panel before marking
commences.
• Candidates' responses must be considered on their merits.
INSTRUCTIONS
1. Wherever a candidate has answered more than the required number of questions, mark
only the first answer/response. (The candidate may NOT answer the essay and the
contextual question on the same genre.)
2. If a candidate has answered all four questions in SECTION A (prescribed poems), mark
only the first two.
3. If a candidate has answered two contextual or two essay questions in SECTIONS B
and C, mark the first one and ignore the second. If a candidate has answered all four
questions (novel) and/or all four questions (drama), mark only the first answer in each
section, provided that one contextual and one essay have been answered.
4. If a candidate gives two answers where the first is wrong and the next one correct, mark
the first answer and ignore the next.
5. If answers are incorrectly numbered, mark according to the marking guidelines.
6. If a spelling error affects the meaning, mark incorrect. If it does not affect the meaning,
mark correct.
7. Essay questions: If the essay is shorter than the required word count, do not penalise,
because the candidate has already penalised himself/herself. If the essay is too long,
assess on merit and discuss with senior markers.
8. Contextual questions: If the candidate does not use inverted commas when asked to
quote, do not penalise.
9. For open-ended questions, no marks should be awarded for YES/NO or I AGREE/
DISAGREE.
The
reason/substantiation/motivation/justification
is
what
should
be
considered.
10. No marks should be awarded for TRUE/FALSE or FACT/OPINION. The reason/
substantiation/motivation/justification is what should be marked.
11. Answers to contextual questions must be assessed holistically in the light of the discussion
during the standardisation of the marking guidelines.
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SECTION A: POETRY
PRESCRIBED POETRY
QUESTION 1: POETRY – ESSAY QUESTION
'THE ROAD NOT TAKEN' – Robert Frost
• Use the following points, among others, as a guideline to marking this question. Responses
might differ, depending on the candidate's sensitivity to and understanding of the text.
• Refer to page 16 for the rubric to assess this question.
• The extended metaphor of the two roads represents a choice in life. The speaker stands
at a fork in a 'yellow wood' (autumn), which suggests a time of maturity/change. He regrets
that he 'could not travel both': choosing one path means giving up the other.
• The speaker hesitates ('long I stood / And looked down one as far as I could'), which shows
how carefully he considers the decision; however, he cannot see where the road leads ('To
where it bent in the undergrowth') – the future is uncertain and cannot be predicted.
• Diction: the second road is 'as just as fair' and 'perhaps' had 'the better claim' because
it was 'grassy and wanted wear', yet the speaker admits that the roads had been worn
'really about the same' and that both 'equally lay / In leaves no step had trodden black'.
The choice is almost random/small; the roads are very similar.
• 'Oh, I kept the first for another day!' The exclamation shows his wish to keep his options
open, but he immediately realises that 'way leads on to way' – one choice leads to another,
so he will probably never return. This shows how even a small decision shapes the whole
course of a life.
• The final stanza looks into the future ('I shall be telling this with a sigh / Somewhere ages
and ages hence'). The 'sigh' is ambiguous: it may express regret, nostalgia or satisfaction.
The dash and repetition of 'I' ('and I – / I took') suggest hesitation/emphasis as the speaker
shapes the story of his life.
• The speaker claims that he 'took the one less traveled by', although earlier he said the
roads were about the same. This irony suggests that people later give meaning to their
choices; 'all the difference' may be positive or negative – we cannot predict the effects of
our choices.
• Tone: reflective/thoughtful/hesitant/regretful in the first three stanzas; nostalgic/wistful/
ambiguous (perhaps ironic) in the final stanza.
• Candidates may agree with the statement fully or partially. [Credit valid alternative
responses.]
[10]
QUESTION 2: POETRY – CONTEXTUAL QUESTION
'SONNET 18' – William Shakespeare
2.1
The speaker asks whether he should compare the person he loves to a
summer's day. (1) He answers that the beloved is lovelier and more gentle/
mild/even-tempered (more 'temperate') than a summer's day. (1)
(2)
2.2
Any TWO of the following:
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• Strong winds damage/shake the delicate young flowers (buds) of May.
• Summer is too short; it does not last long (its 'lease' expires quickly).
[Accept from lines 5–6: the sun is sometimes too hot, or it is often hidden by
clouds.]
(2)
2.3
2.3.1
Metaphor (Accept personification.)
(1)
2.3.2
The sun is compared to the eye of heaven that looks down on the earth.
(1) The image is effective because it shows that even the sun, which
seems so powerful and glorious, is imperfect: it is sometimes too hot
and its 'gold complexion' is often dimmed by clouds. Nature's beauty is
unreliable, unlike the beloved's. (1)
(2)
2.4
The couplet states that as long as people are alive to breathe and read ('So long
as men can breathe, or eyes can see'), this poem will survive ('So long lives
this'), and as long as the poem is read, it will keep the beloved alive ('this gives
life to thee'). The repetition of 'So long' and the balanced, confident rhythm
emphasise permanence. The couplet completes the argument of lines 9–12:
the beloved's 'eternal summer' will not fade because it is preserved in 'eternal
lines' of poetry. The tone is confident/triumphant: art defeats time and death.
[Award 3 marks for a critical discussion linked to the lines.]
(3)
[10]
QUESTION 3: POETRY – CONTEXTUAL QUESTION
'I WANDERED LONELY AS A CLOUD' – William Wordsworth
3.1
The speaker is lonely/isolated/aimless/detached (1); like a cloud drifting high
above the landscape, he wanders without purpose and is not connected to the
world around him. (1)
(2)
3.2
The words 'crowd' and 'host' are normally used for people (or angels), so
the daffodils are personified. (1) The words emphasise the great number of
flowers and suggest that they are lively company; the lonely speaker suddenly
finds himself among a joyful 'crowd'. 'Host' may also suggest a heavenly host
(angels), which makes the flowers seem glorious. (1)
(2)
3.3
3.3.1
Simile
(1)
3.3.2
Like the stars of the Milky Way, the daffodils seem endless/countless
('never-ending line') and they shine/twinkle as they move in the breeze.
(1) The comparison is effective because it conveys the vastness and
brightness of the scene and gives the flowers a heavenly, magical
quality; it suggests that the speaker is awed by them. (1)
(2)
3.4
At the time, the speaker 'little thought' what the scene would mean to him.
In the final stanza he explains that, long afterwards, when he lies on his
couch feeling empty ('vacant') or thoughtful/sad ('pensive'), the memory of
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the daffodils 'flash[es] upon that inward eye' – his imagination/memory. This
memory brings 'bliss' even when he is alone ('the bliss of solitude'), which
contrasts with the loneliness of the opening. His heart 'with pleasure fills, / And
dances with the daffodils': he is no longer a lonely observer but joins in the
dance. The 'wealth' is therefore not material but spiritual/emotional – a lasting
store of joy that nature has given him.
[Award 3 marks for a critical discussion linked to the stanza.]
(3)
[10]
QUESTION 4: POETRY – CONTEXTUAL QUESTION
'INVICTUS' – William Ernest Henley
4.1
The 'night' represents a period of great suffering/hardship/despair/illness/pain
in the speaker's life. (1) It is 'Black as the Pit' (as dark as hell) and covers the
whole world ('from pole to pole'), which shows how overwhelming and complete
his suffering is. (1)
(2)
4.2
4.2.1
Personification (Accept metaphor.)
(1)
4.2.2
Circumstance (the difficult situation/fate) is presented as a fierce
creature or cruel person that has seized/gripped the speaker. (1) The
image is effective because it shows how trapped and helpless he is
and how painful his situation is, which makes his refusal to flinch or cry
out ('I have not winced nor cried aloud') even more admirable. (1)
(2)
4.3
The speaker is courageous/defiant/resilient/proud/strong-willed. (1) Although
he has been badly hurt by misfortune ('bloody'), he refuses to bow his head in
defeat/submission (he will not give in). (1)
(2)
4.4
The final lines are a powerful conclusion. The speaker declares that he alone
controls his life and his inner self, no matter how difficult the 'gate' or how many
punishments await him. The metaphors of the 'master' and the 'captain' suggest
leadership, control and authority: just as a captain steers a ship through storms,
he will direct his own life. The repetition/parallelism of 'I am the … of my …' and
the strong, regular rhythm create a confident, triumphant, defiant tone. The
ending links to 'my unconquerable soul' in line 4 and to the title ('unconquered'),
completing the poem's message of the human spirit's resilience.
[Award 3 marks for a critical discussion that refers to the lines.]
(3)
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UNSEEN POETRY (COMPULSORY)
QUESTION 5: POETRY – CONTEXTUAL QUESTION
'LEISURE' – W.H. Davies
5.1
The speaker is concerned that people are so busy and full of worries/
responsibilities (1) that they no longer have time to pause and look at/enjoy
the world around them; such a life is empty/not worth much. (1)
(2)
5.2
Sheep and cows stand still for long periods, calmly gazing at their surroundings
without hurrying. (1) The speaker suggests that even animals have more time
to rest and enjoy peace than busy human beings; people should learn to be
patient and calm, as the animals are. (1)
(2)
5.3
5.3.1
Personification
(1)
5.3.2
Beauty is presented as a woman who glances at us, dances and smiles.
(1) The image suggests that beauty (in nature) tries to attract our
attention and offers itself to us, but we are too busy to notice/return
her glance or wait for her smile to develop; this makes the reader feel
what he/she is missing. (1)
(2)
5.4
The repetition of 'No time' at the beginning of lines 3, 5, 7, 9 and 11 (anaphora)
emphasises how much people miss because they are always busy; it creates a
list of lost pleasures and a regretful/critical, almost pleading tone. The repetition
also mirrors the monotonous, rushed routine of modern life. The message is
very relevant today: people are busier than ever and are often absorbed in
their phones and screens, so they seldom stop to appreciate nature, rest or
reflect; stress and burnout are common.
[Award 3 marks only if the candidate discusses the effect of the repetition AND
comments on relevance. Credit valid alternative responses.]
(3)
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30
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SECTION B: NOVEL
QUESTION 6: A CHRISTMAS CAROL – ESSAY QUESTION
• Use the following points, among others, as a guideline to marking this question. Responses
might differ, depending on the candidate's sensitivity to and understanding of the text.
• Refer to page 17 for the rubric to assess this question.
• At the beginning, Scrooge is an old, miserly, cold-hearted businessman ('a squeezing,
wrenching, grasping, scraping, clutching, covetous, old sinner'). He refuses his nephew
Fred's invitation, refuses to give to charity and pays his clerk, Bob Cratchit, poorly.
• His attitudes have been fixed for many years; he has lived alone since Marley's death. His
change seems very unlikely – yet it happens in one night.
• Marley's Ghost warns him that he is forging a chain like Marley's and gives him a chance
to escape his fate.
• The Ghost of Christmas Past shows him his lonely childhood, Fezziwig's kindness and
Belle, who left him because he loved money more than her. Scrooge begins to feel regret
and emotion.
• The Ghost of Christmas Present shows him the Cratchits' loving but poor Christmas and
Tiny Tim's illness, Fred's party, and the children Ignorance and Want. His own words
('decrease the surplus population') are thrown back at him, and he shows concern for
Tiny Tim.
• The Ghost of Christmas Yet to Come shows him his unmourned death, the theft of his
belongings and the death of Tiny Tim. He begs for a chance to change and promises to
'honour Christmas in my heart'.
• On Christmas morning, Scrooge is joyful; he sends a prize turkey to the Cratchits, gives
generously to the charity collector, goes to Fred's dinner, raises Bob's salary and becomes
'a second father' to Tiny Tim. He keeps his promise ('Scrooge was better than his word').
• Candidates may argue that the change is sudden and caused by fear, but most will argue
that it shows that a person of any age can recognise his mistakes and change. [Credit valid
alternative/mixed responses.]
[25]
QUESTION 7: A CHRISTMAS CAROL – CONTEXTUAL QUESTION
7.1
It is Christmas Eve, in Scrooge's counting-house (office). (1) Scrooge's nephew,
Fred, has just left after inviting Scrooge to Christmas dinner, and two gentlemen
arrive to collect money for the poor. (1)
(2)
7.2
On the night of the anniversary of Marley's death (Christmas Eve), Marley's
Ghost visits Scrooge. (1) He warns Scrooge to change his ways and tells him
that three Spirits will visit him, which begins Scrooge's transformation. (1)
(2)
7.3
Scrooge is cold/heartless/uncaring towards the poor. (1) He believes that the
poor should be dealt with by prisons and workhouses, which he pays for through
taxes, and that he has no further responsibility to help them. (1)
(2)
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7.4
Scrooge suggests that the poor who would rather die than go to the workhouse
should do so, to reduce the 'surplus' (extra) population. (1) The Ghost of
Christmas Present later repeats these words to Scrooge when Scrooge asks
whether Tiny Tim will live: if Tim is going to die, 'he had better do it, and decrease
the surplus population'. (1) Scrooge is ashamed/overcome with grief and guilt
when he realises that the 'surplus population' includes real people like Tiny Tim,
whom he has come to care about. (1)
(3)
7.5
At this stage, Scrooge is proud/self-satisfied/smug: he is pleased with himself
for getting rid of the gentlemen and sees nothing wrong in his meanness. (1) He
is amused by their failure ('facetious temper'), which shows how hard-hearted
he is. (1) At the end of the novel, Scrooge meets one of the gentlemen in the
street, apologises and whispers a large donation to him that includes 'a great
many back-payments'; he is humble and generous. (1)
(3)
7.6
The Ghost of Christmas Present. (1) It has shown Scrooge the Cratchit family's
Christmas dinner (and Tiny Tim) and Fred's Christmas party. (1)
[Accept other valid scenes, e.g. miners, lighthouse keepers, sailors celebrating
Christmas, the busy streets on Christmas morning. Award 1 mark for naming
the Spirit and 1 mark for TWO valid scenes.]
(2)
7.7
The long list of harsh adjectives emphasises how badly the children have
suffered (1) and creates a shocking/disturbing image of poverty and neglect;
'wolfish' suggests that poverty has made them almost like wild animals. (1)
(2)
7.8
The children symbolise the ignorance (lack of education) and want (poverty/
need) that society has created and neglected; they belong to all of mankind
('They are Man's'). (1) The boy, Ignorance, is the more dangerous of the two
(1) because an uneducated society cannot see or solve its problems; ignorance
will lead to 'Doom' (ruin/crime/the destruction of society) unless it is corrected
through education. (1)
(3)
7.9
In EXTRACT A, Scrooge was indifferent to the poor; now he is 'appalled' and
cannot bring himself to lie that the children are 'fine' – he feels shock and pity. (1)
He shows concern by asking, 'Have they no refuge or resource?', which shows
that he now cares what happens to them. (1) The Spirit's use of Scrooge's
own cruel words ('Are there no prisons? … Are there no workhouses?') makes
Scrooge realise how heartless he was, and it shames him; the contrast shows
how far he has begun to change. (1)
(3)
7.10
CONVINCING: Scrooge's change is developed step by step: he weeps over
his own childhood, feels regret about Belle, shows concern for Tiny Tim and is
horrified by his own lonely death. By the end he is 'better than his word' and
keeps his promises – he raises Bob's salary and becomes a second father to
Tiny Tim. Readers are shown that his coldness came from loneliness and fear
of poverty, so his change is believable.
OR
NOT CONVINCING: The change happens in one night and is largely caused
by fear of his own death; a man who has been mean for decades would not
become so generous so quickly.
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[Credit
valid
alternative/mixed
responses.
Award
3
marks
for
a
well-substantiated discussion.]
(3)
[25]
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QUESTION 8: THE HOUND OF THE BASKERVILLES – ESSAY QUESTION
• Use the following points, among others, as a guideline to marking this question. Responses
might differ, depending on the candidate's sensitivity to and understanding of the text.
• Refer to page 17 for the rubric to assess this question.
• The moor (Dartmoor) is described as wild, desolate, gloomy and ancient: 'melancholy',
with 'jagged and sinister hills', granite tors and the ruins of prehistoric huts. It creates an
atmosphere of isolation and danger far from the safety of London.
• The Great Grimpen Mire, a deadly bog in which a moor pony is sucked down, symbolises
hidden danger and death; Stapleton uses his knowledge of a path through the Mire to hide
the hound. Stapleton is finally believed to have died in the Mire.
• The howling of the hound across the moor at night frightens Watson and Sir Henry and
seems to confirm the supernatural legend. The escaped convict (Selden) hides on the
moor; the mysterious man on the tor (Holmes in hiding) adds suspense.
• The moor isolates characters (Sir Henry is told never to cross it alone at night) and makes
them vulnerable: Selden dies on the moor wearing Sir Henry's clothes.
• In the climax, the thick fog rolling over the moor ('the wall of fog') hides the hound until the
last moment and threatens Holmes's plan, creating great suspense.
• Baskerville Hall, the yew alley and the moor-gate also add to the gloomy atmosphere.
• Candidates may argue that the moor is like a character (it is personified, it 'watches', it is
threatening) or that characters such as Holmes and Stapleton are more important, while
the setting supports them. [Credit valid alternative/mixed responses.]
[25]
QUESTION 9: THE HOUND OF THE BASKERVILLES – CONTEXTUAL QUESTION
9.1
Dr Mortimer, Sir Charles Baskerville's friend and doctor, has come to consult
Sherlock Holmes (and Watson) at Baker Street. (1) He has read them the
old manuscript containing the legend of the hound of the Baskervilles and a
newspaper report of Sir Charles's death, and now tells them the facts that were
not made public. (1)
(2)
9.2
Sir Charles believed in the family legend/curse of a supernatural hound that
hunted the Baskervilles. (1) He feared that the hound would come for him; he
had a weak heart, and he was afraid to go out on the moor at night. (1)
(2)
9.3
There was no physical injury, so he was not attacked or murdered in the usual
way. (1) His twisted features and his fingers dug into the ground suggest that he
died of extreme fear/terror, which caused his weak heart to fail (heart attack).
(1)
(2)
9.4
The line is effective as a chapter ending because it is dramatic/shocking and
creates suspense: it seems to confirm the supernatural legend of the hound.
(1) Dr Mortimer's whispering voice and strange look build tension, and the short
questions and answers ('Footprints?' 'Footprints.') lead up to a climax. (1) The
reader is eager to read on to find out whether the hound is real and how Holmes
will explain it (cliffhanger). (1)
(3)
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9.5
Dr Mortimer believes that Stapleton is a concerned friend of Sir Charles. (1) In
fact, Stapleton is a Baskerville (Rodger Baskerville's son) who wants to inherit
the estate; he is the villain who used the hound to frighten Sir Charles to death.
(1) His 'concern' about Sir Charles's health is ironic: he knew about his weak
heart and used this knowledge to kill him. The reader later realises this, but
Mortimer does not. (1)
(3)
9.6
Holmes has discovered that Stapleton is the murderer and wants to catch him
in the act. (1) Sir Henry has been sent to dinner at Merripit House (Stapleton's
home) and is told to walk home across the moor, so that Stapleton will release
the hound and Holmes can catch it/him. (1)
(2)
9.7
The hound is described as 'enormous' and 'coal-black', 'not such a hound
as mortal eyes have ever seen', which makes it seem supernatural. (1)
Fire imagery ('Fire burst from its open mouth', 'smouldering glare', 'flickering
flame') makes it seem hellish/demonic. (1) The superlatives/comparatives
'more savage, more appalling, more hellish' and the reference to a 'delirious
dream of a disordered brain' emphasise the terror and convey Watson's panic.
(1)
(3)
9.8
Sir Henry is in terrible danger/helpless/terrified. (1) He sees the hound
approaching but cannot escape or defend himself; his raised hands and white
face show his horror. (1)
(2)
9.9
The hound's howl of pain shows that it can be wounded and is therefore a real
animal, not a supernatural creature. (1) This marks the triumph of reason over
superstition, which is a central idea in the novel: the legend that frightened Sir
Charles to death is shown to be false. (1) Holmes's logical methods expose the
'curse' as a cunning trick by Stapleton (the hound is a real dog painted with
phosphorus). (1)
(3)
9.10
JUSTIFIED: There is no legal evidence against Stapleton, and catching him
in the act is the only way to prove his guilt and stop him; Holmes is close by
with Watson and Lestrade, armed, to protect Sir Henry. Sir Henry agrees to
cooperate.
OR
NOT JUSTIFIED: Holmes places Sir Henry's life in great danger without telling
him the full plan; the fog nearly ruins the plan and the hound reaches Sir Henry
before it is shot. Sir Henry suffers a nervous shock and needs a long voyage
to recover.
[Credit
valid
alternative/mixed
responses.
Award
3
marks
for
a
well-substantiated discussion based on the novel as a whole.]
(3)
[25]
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SECTION C: DRAMA
QUESTION 10: ROMEO AND JULIET – ESSAY QUESTION
• Use the following points, among others, as a guideline to marking this question. Responses
might differ, depending on the candidate's sensitivity to and understanding of the text.
• Refer to page 17 for the rubric to assess this question.
• FATE: The Prologue calls the lovers 'star-cross'd' and says their deaths are fated; Romeo
has a premonition before the Capulet feast that 'some consequence yet hanging in the
stars' will lead to his 'untimely death'. Chance events play a part: the servant who cannot
read asks Romeo for help and so he learns of the feast; Friar John is delayed by the plague
and cannot deliver Friar Lawrence's letter; Romeo arrives at the tomb minutes before Juliet
wakes.
• HASTE/IMPULSIVENESS: Romeo forgets Rosaline immediately and falls in love with
Juliet at first sight; the couple decide to marry within a day of meeting ('It is too rash,
too unadvis'd, too sudden', Juliet admits). Friar Lawrence warns, 'Wisely and slow; they
stumble that run fast.'
• Romeo's rage after Mercutio's death leads him to kill Tybalt ('fire-ey'd fury be my conduct
now'), which results in his banishment.
• Juliet takes the drastic step of drinking the Friar's potion rather than confessing her
marriage.
• Romeo rushes to Verona after hearing of Juliet's 'death', buys poison and kills himself
without waiting; Juliet stabs herself on waking.
• Other characters' haste also contributes: Capulet suddenly brings the wedding to Paris
forward; the feud between the families creates the conditions for tragedy.
• Candidates may agree, disagree or argue that fate and the characters' choices work
together. [Credit valid alternative/mixed responses.]
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QUESTION 11: ROMEO AND JULIET – CONTEXTUAL QUESTION
11.1
The extract takes place on the night of the Capulets' feast, where Romeo (a
Montague) and Juliet (a Capulet) have met and fallen in love. (1) Romeo has
climbed over the wall into the Capulets' orchard and overhears Juliet speaking
on her balcony; she does not know that he is there. (1)
(2)
11.2
Juliet is asking WHY Romeo has to be Romeo – a Montague, a member of her
family's enemy. (1) She wishes that he could give up his name/family (or that
she could stop being a Capulet) so that they could be together. (1)
[Do not accept 'Where are you, Romeo?']
(2)
11.3
Juliet argues that a name is only a label; it is not part of a person's body or
character. (1) A rose would smell just as sweet if it had a different name; in the
same way, Romeo would remain just as perfect/lovable if he were not called
Montague. (1) She suggests that the feud over names is meaningless/foolish
and that love should be more important than family loyalties. (1)
(3)
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11.4
Romeo is fearless/reckless/impulsive/carried away by love. (1) He believes that
love gives him the power to overcome any obstacle, such as high walls, and he
does not care about the danger posed by Juliet's kinsmen. (1)
(2)
11.5
Romeo should speak in a tender/romantic/gentle/light-hearted/teasing tone. (1)
He could step closer to the balcony, look up at Juliet adoringly and place his
hand on his heart. (1) This would show that he is more afraid of Juliet's rejection/
an unkind look from her than of her kinsmen's swords; he dismisses the danger
because he is in love. (1)
[Credit valid alternative responses. Award 1 mark for tone, 1 mark for body
language and 1 mark for motivation.]
(3)
11.6
Tybalt challenges Romeo to a duel because Romeo attended (gatecrashed) the
Capulet feast. (1) Romeo, who has just secretly married Juliet (Tybalt's cousin),
refuses to fight; Mercutio is disgusted by Romeo's 'calm, dishonourable, vile
submission' and fights Tybalt to defend Romeo's honour. (1)
(2)
11.7
Mercutio blames both the Montagues and the Capulets for his death because
their senseless feud caused the fight. (1) His curse foreshadows the disasters
that follow for both families: Romeo kills Tybalt and is banished, (1) and the
curse is fulfilled when Romeo and Juliet both die, as well as Paris and Lady
Montague; both houses are struck by tragedy. (1)
(3)
11.8
Mercutio is witty/humorous/brave/playful even in the face of death. (1) He
makes light of his fatal wound with a pun on 'grave' (serious/dead and buried)
and refuses to show fear, although he knows that he is dying. (1)
(2)
11.9
Romeo, who had tried to be peaceful and gentle ('respective lenity') towards
Tybalt because he is now related to him by marriage, abandons his self-control.
(1) He becomes enraged and vengeful, allowing 'fire-ey'd fury' to guide him. (1)
He challenges Tybalt to a fight to the death to avenge Mercutio, which shows
that he acts impulsively/is ruled by passion. (1)
(3)
11.10
Romeo realises that the events of this day (Mercutio's death) will lead to more
misfortune on future days (1); this is the beginning of sorrow that will only be
ended later (by other events). (1) The lines foreshadow the tragedy: Romeo
kills Tybalt, is banished, is separated from Juliet, and a chain of events leads to
the deaths of both lovers, which finally end the feud. The scene is the turning
point of the play. (1)
(3)
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QUESTION 12: JULIUS CAESAR – ESSAY QUESTION
• Use the following points, among others, as a guideline to marking this question. Responses
might differ, depending on the candidate's sensitivity to and understanding of the text.
• Refer to page 17 for the rubric to assess this question.
• Brutus is respected in Rome as an honourable man; he loves Caesar but loves Rome more
('Not that I loved Caesar less, but that I loved Rome more'). He joins the conspiracy for the
good of the republic, not for personal gain.
• His idealism makes him easy to manipulate: Cassius flatters him and sends forged letters
that appear to be from the citizens of Rome.
• He makes idealistic but disastrous decisions: he refuses to let the conspirators swear an
oath, rejects the idea of including Cicero, and refuses to kill Antony ('Let us be sacrificers,
but not butchers').
• He allows Antony to speak at Caesar's funeral and leaves before Antony speaks, trusting
that his own reasoned speech will satisfy the crowd; Antony turns the mob against the
conspirators.
• He argues with Cassius about accepting bribes, holding himself to high moral standards;
he insists on marching to Philippi, against Cassius's advice, and loses the battle.
• He takes his own life rather than be captured; Antony calls him 'the noblest Roman of them
all', who acted 'in a general honest thought'.
• Candidates may also argue that Brutus is naive, proud or self-righteous, or that Cassius
and Antony are responsible for his downfall. [Credit valid alternative/mixed responses.]
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QUESTION 13: JULIUS CAESAR – CONTEXTUAL QUESTION
13.1
It is the feast of the Lupercal; Caesar has passed through the streets in triumph
and a soothsayer has warned him to 'Beware the ides of March'. (1) Brutus and
Cassius stay behind while Caesar goes to the games, and Cassius begins to
persuade Brutus that Caesar has become too powerful. They hear the crowd
shouting (as Caesar is offered the crown). (1)
(2)
13.2
Caesar is compared to the Colossus, a gigantic statue that straddles/towers
over the world, (1) which shows that Cassius feels Caesar has become far too
powerful – almost like a god or a dictator. (1) In contrast, Cassius and Brutus
('petty men') are small and insignificant, creeping under his legs; they will die
without honour/as slaves, which reveals Cassius's envy/resentment and his
fear of Caesar's power. (1)
(3)
13.3
Cassius means that people are responsible for their own fate; (1) it is not
destiny/the stars that make them inferior to Caesar but their own failure to act/
take control. (1)
(2)
13.4
Cassius flatters Brutus by comparing their names and arguing that 'Brutus' is
as fair, as weighty and as powerful as 'Caesar'. (1) He suggests that there is
nothing special about Caesar to make him more important than Brutus. (1) He
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appeals to Brutus's pride/sense of honour to stir up resentment and persuade
him to join the conspiracy against Caesar. (1)
(3)
13.5
Brutus's ancestor (Lucius Junius Brutus) drove the last king (Tarquin) out of
Rome and helped to establish the republic. (1) Cassius reminds Brutus of his
family's tradition of opposing tyranny to persuade him that it is his duty to stop
Caesar from becoming king. (1)
(2)
13.6
Brutus grants Antony permission because he believes that it will show the
conspirators' respect for Caesar and that Antony is harmless; he wants to
appear fair/honourable. (1) Condition (any ONE): Antony must not blame the
conspirators; he may say all the good he can of Caesar; he must say that he
speaks with the conspirators' permission; he must speak after Brutus (from the
same pulpit). (1)
(2)
13.7
Antony claims that he has come only to bury Caesar, not to praise him; (1)
ironically, his whole speech praises Caesar and turns the crowd against the
conspirators. (1)
(2)
13.8
At first the word seems sincere, as Antony obeys Brutus's condition not to
blame the conspirators. (1) Through constant repetition, set against evidence
that Caesar was not ambitious, the word becomes sarcastic/ironic, and the
crowd begins to doubt Brutus's honour. (1) The repetition is a powerful rhetorical
device that undermines Brutus without openly attacking him and eventually stirs
the crowd to mutiny/turns the mob against the conspirators. (1)
(3)
13.9
Antony gives concrete examples: Caesar brought captives home whose
ransoms filled the public treasury, not his own pockets; (1) he wept when the
poor cried, which shows compassion rather than ambition; (1) and he refused
the crown three times at the Lupercal. After each example, Antony asks a
rhetorical question ('Did this in Caesar seem ambitious?'/'Was this ambition?'),
which leads the crowd to conclude that Brutus was wrong. (1)
(3)
13.10
Antony should speak in a sorrowful/emotional/grief-stricken, broken voice. (1)
He could turn towards Caesar's coffin, place his hand on it or on his heart,
and pause/bow his head as if overcome by tears. (1) This would show his grief
and win the sympathy of the crowd; the pause also allows the citizens time to
discuss his words, which is part of his strategy to manipulate them. (1)
[Credit valid alternative responses. Award 1 mark for tone, 1 mark for body
language and 1 mark for motivation.]
(3)
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25
GRAND TOTAL:
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SECTION A: Assessment rubric for literary essay: Poetry (10 Marks)
Criteria
Exceptional
Skilful
Moderate
Elementary
Inadequate
CONTENT
6 MARKS
Interpretation of topic.
Depth of argument,
justification and grasp
of text.
5–6
– In-depth
interpretation of topic
– Range of striking
arguments; extensively
supported from poem
– Excellent
understanding of
genre and poem
4
– Shows
understanding and has
interpreted topic well
– Fairly detailed
response
– Sound arguments
given, but not all of
them as well motivated
as they could be
– Understanding of
genre and poem
3
– Fair interpretation of
topic
– Some good points in
support of topic
– Some arguments
supported, but
evidence is not always
convincing
– Basic understanding
of genre and poem
2
– Unsatisfactory
interpretation of topic
– Hardly any points in
support of topic
– Inadequate
understanding of
genre and poem
0–1
– No understanding of
the topic
– No reference to the
poem
– Learner has not
come to grips with
genre and poem
STRUCTURE AND
LANGUAGE
4 MARKS
Structure, logical flow
and presentation.
Language, tone and
style used in the essay.
4
– Coherent structure
– Arguments
well-structured and
clearly developed
– Language, tone and
style mature,
impressive, correct
– Virtually error-free
grammar, spelling and
punctuation
3
– Clear structure and
logical flow of
argument
– Flow of argument
can be followed
– Language, tone and
style largely correct
2
– Some evidence of
structure
– Essay lacks a
well-structured flow of
logic and coherence
– Language errors
minor; tone and style
mostly appropriate
1
– Structure shows
faulty planning
– Arguments not
logically arranged
– Language errors
evident
– Inappropriate tone
and style
0–1
– Poorly structured
– Serious language
errors and incorrect
style
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SECTIONS B AND C: Assessment rubric for literary essay: Novel and Drama (25 Marks)
Criteria
Exceptional
Skilful
Moderate
Elementary
Inadequate
CONTENT
15 MARKS
Interpretation of topic.
Depth of argument,
justification and grasp
of text.
12–15
– Outstanding
response: 14–15
– Excellent response:
12–13
– In-depth
interpretation of topic
– Range of striking
arguments extensively
supported from text
– Excellent
understanding of
genre and text
9–11
– Shows
understanding and has
interpreted topic well
– Fairly detailed
response
– Some sound
arguments given, but
not all of them as well
motivated as they
could be
– Understanding of
genre and text evident
6–8
– Mediocre
interpretation of topic;
not all aspects
explored in detail
– Some good points in
support of topic
– Some arguments
supported, but
evidence is not always
convincing
– Partial understanding
of genre and text
4–5
– Scant interpretation
of topic; hardly any
aspects explored in
detail
– Few points in
support of topic
– Very little relevant
argument
– Little understanding
of genre and text
0–3
– Very little
understanding of the
topic
– Weak attempt to
answer the question
– Arguments not
convincing
– Learner has not
come to grips with
genre or text
STRUCTURE AND
LANGUAGE
10 MARKS
Structure, logical flow
and presentation.
Language, tone and
style used in the essay.
8–10
– Coherent structure
– Excellent
introduction and
conclusion
– Arguments
well-structured and
clearly developed
– Language, tone and
style mature,
impressive, correct
6–7
– Clear structure and
logical flow of
argument
– Introduction and
conclusion and other
paragraphs coherently
organised
– Logical flow of
argument
– Language, tone and
style largely correct
4–5
– Some evidence of
structure
– Logic and coherence
apparent, but flawed
– Some language
errors; tone and style
mostly appropriate
– Paragraphing mostly
correct
2–3
– Structure shows
faulty planning
– Arguments not
logically arranged
– Language errors
evident
– Inappropriate tone
and style
– Paragraphing faulty
0–1
– Lack of planned
structure impedes flow
of argument
– Language errors and
incorrect style make
this an unsuccessful
piece of writing
– Inappropriate tone
and style
– Paragraphing faulty
MARK RANGE
20–25
15–19
10–14
5–9
0–4
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